K r u t i P a t e l
H O NO R S E N G L I S H T E N P O R T F O L I O
CREATIVITY AND EXPRESSION
It took me a while to figure out what I wanted to do for this piece. I wanted to write from a different perspective. I am proud of this piece becuase though, I had found what perspective I wanted to write in, it was diffficult perspective. Not to sound boastful or arragont, but I felt as if my word choices were excellent!
This is DEFINITELY not one of my best pieces, but I am greatly proud of it. Open--ended assignignments for me, personally, are a "make or break" deal for me. This particular assignment had me stumped, and I typed and erased three diiferent stories atleast two billion times. I was completely blocked; however I managed to take all of the messy ideas my brain that brain came up with and combined them into a parody story. My creativity is one of the best things featured in this piece. However, organization was NOT my forte in this piece. My paragraphs are all over the place. The sentences could have been better worded. and way too many comma slices are present!